I've posted another story... well it's the same one but I've changed a few things. I proof read the bit you read and revised, and another big change is that I switched some names around, the main character is now Corporal Williams and the Squad leader is now Sergeant Roberts. I like the name Williams a bit more so I gave it to the main character. I've switched the mission around to a UNSC personnel hostage situation. Aside from that I think I wrote about two more pages worth of material in mircosoft word.
Whats to come... Well I think the mission will go wrong. Someone will die. Williams who now seems like a little baby afraid of battle will grow out of that. And thats all I have for now. I'm just letting my creative juices flow in a prologue as I try to figure out a real storyline.
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Whats to come... Well I think the mission will go wrong. Someone will die. Williams who now seems like a little baby afraid of battle will grow out of that. And thats all I have for now. I'm just letting my creative juices flow in a prologue as I try to figure out a real storyline.