Ah, thank you. I tried to find something pleasing and easy to read. Do you think I should add an overall at the bottom or is the paragraph at the beginning good?
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I think you can condense the summary a bit more (and add a header for those too, that says "Intro" or something like that), but other than that it looks alright
except that you use "ridiculously fun" in both the intro and fun sections
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Really, I didn't notice that. The game is ridiculously fun though, I like it more than a lot of $60 games I've played. It's awesome. And I'll keep that tip in mind when I do the ninja gaiden 2 review tomorrow. Hopefully it'll just improve on the structure.
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I've been playing through on easy, and it's not too hard yet, although I did just die for the first time. It's still pretty fun though. I haven't had too bad of camera problems like I've heard a lot of people have.
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Yeah, it was jumping around pillars trying to get from one place to another. Really annoying. There was actually something similar to that later on, but that one was just a cruel trick they played on you, making you think you had to do something special when it was really just a short jump away.
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ʊIrishancest
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except that you use "ridiculously fun" in both the intro and fun sections
"We aren't allowed to say brainstorm where I work because it's apparently offensive to people with cerebal palsy (bullshit)." --Chalkley3
ʊIrishancest
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ʊchillinvillain
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"We aren't allowed to say brainstorm where I work because it's apparently offensive to people with cerebal palsy (bullshit)." --Chalkley3
ʊIrishancest
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ʊchillinvillain
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"We aren't allowed to say brainstorm where I work because it's apparently offensive to people with cerebal palsy (bullshit)." --Chalkley3
ʊIrishancest
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ʊchillinvillain
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"We aren't allowed to say brainstorm where I work because it's apparently offensive to people with cerebal palsy (bullshit)." --Chalkley3
ʊIrishancest
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Beware. The Internewt is real!
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ʊchillinvillain
Is In Your Base, Killing Your Pokemans
"We aren't allowed to say brainstorm where I work because it's apparently offensive to people with cerebal palsy (bullshit)." --Chalkley3
ʊIrishancest
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